Essay Title: 

personal statement

March 31, 2016 | Author: | Posted in application essay, education

Question 1 (200 words

Focus : Academic Preparation

Question : What is your intended major ? Discuss how your interest in the field developed and describe any experience you have had in the field – such as volunteer work , internships and employment , participation in student organizations and activities – and what you have gained from your involvement

My early academic requirements such as grammar school and middle school years were spent studying in China . I never wavered in my commitment to do my best academically because in China , if you do not have good grades [banner_entry_middle]

br in school , your future would not be bright . My middle school education was finished in the United States . After , I went on to attend four years of high school

After High School , I enrolled in general courses at Pasadena City College . I am an average student with average grades but a burning passion to learn and draw . I joined various school activities that allow me to hone my architectural skills . I have almost completed all the general courses that I have to take . I am hoping to be able to attend more advanced classes and hone my skills further at your university . I am a very patient person who has the determination to succeed in the field that I have chosen . I have been developing my portfolio of architectural designs over a number of years now . I have also been an active member of various clubs and organizations in Pasadena City College where my design skills are often put to good use

Question 2 (600 words

Focus : Potential to Contribute

Question : Tell us about a talent , experience , contribution or personal quality you will bring to the University of California

I do not find it hard to make friends and to keep them . I wish to be able to extend warmth and helpfulness to any other members of the Chinese community who shall also be coming to the your university in to further their college education . I would like to be an active participant in school events and politics . I was raised with strong convictions and beliefs about life people ‘s rights . It is my wish to help the world become united in friendship . I am willing to help my classmates with their lessons where I will be excelling while they need a helping hand . I would like to develop my leadership abilities by joining school civic groups and the student council . The school has a large campus and there is always work to be done . I would like to make sure that the student body is always an active participant in the programs that the school has designed to help build character and confidence in a person . College is the happiest time in a student ‘s life . I fully intend to enjoy my campus life to the fullest and bring my closest friends and classmates along for the life-changing ride . During my first few weeks at the new school , I expect that I will be joining social activities that… [banner_entry_footer]


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